REVISION SECTION25% Scenario You are hired as an Administrative Assistant at the Simon & Paul…

REVISION SECTION25%

Scenario

You are hired as an Administrative Assistant at the Simon & Paul Architecture firm thatis located inDowntown Vancouver. Your boss and owner, Mr. Peter Simon, gives you the following sample work to edit and make revisions. Mr. Simon is too busy to edit the following information about the firm that was written by the previous Administrative Assistant who was fired before you joined the firm. This piece of writing will be going on the company’s website.

Instructions

Revise the following paragraphs. You need to make the paragraphs concise. Check the grammar and make the paragraphs sound professional. Write your answer in the booklet.

Simon & Paul Architecture Firm

Simon & Paul Architecture firm was founded around John Simon and Frank Paul out 1999. The firm has 30 architects (all males and bald), 8 Project Managers (3 males, 4 females, and one handicapped), and 12 Administrative staff members (all females). Simon & Paul will create award winning design projects from corporate offices, shopping malls, designing airports, and schools across Canada.

ENGAGE. EVOLVE. ENRICHING.

The creative and intelligence evolution of both the design process and the craft of architect guides our work. The depth of our engagement with clients, users and stakeholdersgenerate sophisticated responses to the unique constellation of social, culturally and environmental concerns of each project.

We think we thrive on the challenge to designing and realize a genuinely modern, livable, and sustainable built environment and our insight and expertise, gained overtwo decades of producing professionally recognized projects, ensures efficient and elegant buildings attuned to their own unique context and conditions.

While knowledgeable about and experienced with sustainable metrics for example Living Building Challenge, LEED, and ASHRAE, wealigns yourselves first and foremost with the core principles behind these systems. We continually reappraise my practices to develop new, somewhat, strategies that promotes the health and well-being of occupants and the responsible management of resources.